He walked the desolate plains of this strange dreamland, fixed on the small sound in his ear. The air was so still that this tiny whimper could travel endlessly, echoing off the crags and in the shallow alcoves. Thick pockets of smoke or fog hung in the air, blurring the horizon and masking the jagged tips of the rock formations that jutted out of the ground. The sky above and the ground beneath were a bleak and dusty gray.
For a moment he thought himself lost, but then the sound would echo again. It beckoned him to come nearer, though he never could quite happen upon it—not lately. It had not always been like this. In the beginning of this period of recurring dreams, he’d been able to rescue her, and carry her—comfort her. Now he simply could not find her. He’d spend the whole night following that soft little sound that pained him so much. It was the sound that he remembered from her childhood years when she’d run to him with a small injury or whatever news had broken her five-year-old heart. And he’d pick her up and cradle her, and promise her things would turn out all right.
The urge to comfort her remained, these fourteen years later. So every night he’d wander in agony, tortured that he was unable to reach her…Tonight was no different, he thought. He walked along, alert but unhurried. There was no reason to believe he would find her this night, if ever. He’d long since accepted the fact that he’d lost her. But at least he could hear her, so she was still somewhere near.He wound his way through the unending maze, sometimes closer, sometimes farther from that soft little voice.
Then at once, the sky darkened and air felt weighted. A piercing shriek rent the silence—answering itself as it ricocheted all around. It seemed to grow louder with each repeating cry, overlapping and until it surmounted into one thunderous scream.The ground beneath him trembled and the sky above turned black. The clouds churned into a swirling vortex and lightning flickered at its edges. He spun around and caught a glimpse of her as she fell. She collapsed into a heap in the dirt, only several meters away from him. He leaped towards her but the ground lurched beneath him and he fell to the ground.
He lifted his head to see her drag herself away, weakly and strangely like a wounded animal. She was so thin and so pallid. He reached for her, but the world tipped to one side and he found himself grasping at the sand and rocks as he was pulled away. It was as though he were sliding down the wall of a cliff; yet still, she crept away—vertically now, as he was falling. He looked down and saw what he dreaded. It was a natural bridge of sorts, stretching over an unexpected chasm that seemed to widen with each clap of thunder. He scrambled to climb back up, but he was always unable.
He glanced back again at the bridge—the bridge to his own world. The end of it was blurred… He knew where it would end, as he always awoke in his bedroom. He could see it even now—not as it actually was, but he could perceive it. Its boundaries were undefined, but its basic shape and form were rather clear. The walls were transparent, but the shapes of the furniture within were sharp and certain. He made one last effort to climb and to remain in this dream, having found her at last, but the whirling clouds in the sky fell upon him and everything went black. His eyes flicked open and he found himself staring at the ceiling. It took him several seconds to realize he was holding his breath. When he’d caught it again, he closed his eyes. After several moments of squeezing them shut, he reluctantly admitted defeat. He could not go back.
He walked to the bathroom, like a dead man. The reflection of his face looked the part, ashen as it was. He ran the hot water and rubbed at his eyes. The dim morning light offered him another half hour of shut-eye if he so pleased, but he refused.
“Wake up, Laurence.” He said to himself. He was frequently called Larry, but chose to address commands to himself with his full name. His wife had used to laugh and say it was actually his mother’s voice echoing in his ear. He would jokingly insist it was actually his mother-in-law, but that wasn’t so funny these days. Both his wife and his mother were gone. His life since had been a nightmare.
And it was so strange to travel from dream to dream. Even as he stood before his mirror awake he felt as though he were still asleep and fighting the same invisible foe. He tested the water, found it still frigid cold and filled his cupped hands. He plunged his face into it and hoped that he could wake himself.
In the next room, a cell phone buzzed somewhere beneath the bed on the wooden floor. It traveled several inches in one direction, hailing the teenager above with its ‘beat-box’ alarm. The teenage girl remained immobile, she hadn’t even heard it. It buzzed again; louder this time before another period of silence. She’d been vaguely aware of it this time, but was counting on its automatic fifteen-minute snooze.
Then it started up again, and a lanky boy with mussed hair and all the awkwardness of early adolescence burst into the room. He didn’t say a word; he just dove under the bed, snatched the phone up and pummeled it into his palm until the battery fell out. Emma’s drowsiness gave way to rage and she bellowed with unearthly volume “Get out of here, Charlie!” She shoved him towards the door, and he flinched. He thrust the remains of her phone at her, lest she scratch his eyes out in her frenzy.
“Emma!” Larry hissed from the doorway as the boy was flung into his chest. The noise of the scuffle had summoned his senses. Ever the referee—though grossly ineffective, Larry relished even this—the most undesirable of his parental duties, as it was one of the few connections he still had with his children. They were more like tenants. Tenants who wished to free up more space in the small apartment by murdering the other occupant.
Charlie recovered quickly from the shove. Larry caught his sleeve and Charlie caught his balance enough to jerk away. He bounced off the walls down the hall in his escape to his own room.
Emma slammed the door. Raving from the other side about her lack of privacy, the dismal state of being that was her life, and the general unfairness of her situation. The latter half of these complaints was muffled by her pillow as she retreated to her bed. Every morning like this was an indicator of how awful the rest of the day would be. And yet everyday was some variation of this same scenario.
He returned to his room and dragged out the shirt and pants he would wear to work. The phone rang right before stepped into the shower. The phone number was unfamiliar and he stands debating as the room fills with steam. Will he answer it? The phone stops ringing and goes over to voice-mail. Unperturbed, he heads for the shower again and again it rings. It buzzes its way off the counter and he catches it before it hits the floor. His thumb somehow catches the ‘answer’ button. He panics. Hang up quickly or own up and speak?
Thursday, May 27, 2010
Intertwined Intro
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